Illusion of Control Chapter 6

Title: Illusion of Control
Author: Kamika Farinas
Chapter: 6
Rating: R
Words: 7929
Summary: How far will a quiet loner go in order to retrieve her precious notebook from her hated enemy, the It boy or rather Mr. Popular?
AN: This chapter's LONGGGGG..... Yeah. Well. I want to first apologize as to how late this chapter is. School REALLY got busy after the last chapter and I've been struggling to keep my grades up. Luckily, classes just ended two days ago so I was able to finish this chapter up. But I do want to say some things about this chapter. First of all, my cursing REALLY increases with this chapter. I mean, I think I cursed almost every other line. (Okay, a bit of an exaggeration.) Second of all, while I liked parts of this chapter, I really felt the scenes towards the end were weak, so I apologize for how lame it was. I had wanted it to be so much better, but couldn't achieve it. And lastly, I want to know if there's any chance I can get a beta reader? I've been having some trouble in my writing and I can't tell for myself what's good and what's not. So... if anyone's interested, do e-mail me at elementsky01 (at) hotmail (dot) com. If you've written something before or beta-ed something before, do include links. I'd love to have some reference points. Anyway, after this long and lengthy note, onto the story. (Taken exactly from my post on fictionpress.)

( Chapter 6 )

Illusion of Control Chapter 6

Title: Illusion of Control
Author: Kamika Farinas
Chapter: 6
Rating: R
Words: 7929
Summary: How far will a quiet loner go in order to retrieve her precious notebook from her hated enemy, the It boy or rather Mr. Popular?
AN: This chapter's LONGGGGG..... Yeah. Well. I want to first apologize as to how late this chapter is. School REALLY got busy after the last chapter and I've been struggling to keep my grades up. Luckily, classes just ended two days ago so I was able to finish this chapter up. But I do want to say some things about this chapter. First of all, my cursing REALLY increases with this chapter. I mean, I think I cursed almost every other line. (Okay, a bit of an exaggeration.) Second of all, while I liked parts of this chapter, I really felt the scenes towards the end were weak, so I apologize for how lame it was. I had wanted it to be so much better, but couldn't achieve it. And lastly, I want to know if there's any chance I can get a beta reader? I've been having some trouble in my writing and I can't tell for myself what's good and what's not. So... if anyone's interested, do e-mail me at elementsky01 (at) hotmail (dot) com. If you've written something before or beta-ed something before, do include links. I'd love to have some reference points. Anyway, after this long and lengthy note, onto the story. (Taken exactly from my post on fictionpress.)

( Chapter 6 )